View Full Version : Student Review Contest #5 Finals
Mouse
08-12-2006, 10:49 AM
Time to vote!
If you'd like to take part in voting, please read all the reviews thoroughly and vote for the best one. Voting ends Saturday, August 19, 2006. Winner starts contest #6.
Itachi Uchiha
08-12-2006, 05:51 PM
After careful review...
6th Place - Kaitou Saint Tail
5th Place - D.N.Angel
4th Place - Dragon Half (this review was well organized, but it was rather bland)
3rd Place - The Twelve Kingdoms (this review had the most untapped potential of all the reviews I read. If you had bothered to polish this up it would have easily made second)
2nd Place - Adventures of the Mini-Goddesses (This was well organized and I loved how you voiced your opinion. This was the best example of an AA style review among the submitted reviews)
1st Place - Pokemon (This review was written in the style that I learned to write reviews in English composition 101... Beside that it was very fluid and visually descriptive. I loved the simple yet amazing way he described everything. It explained things in a way so that someone unfamiliar and familiar with it will both get a worthwhile experience from the review. This one was by far the best review in the contest.)
Shadowmage
08-12-2006, 08:08 PM
Dragon Half: There is almost no meat in this review... no tasty fat either. There is just too much bone.
Twelve Kingdoms: A good review, but it felt a little too rough around the edges.
Kaitou Saint Tail: Half of this review is a synopsis. It's best to save plot explanations for the summary portion and quickly get to the review portion.
DNAngel: This review relies too heavily on the reader's knowledge of the plot (and characters). It is better to specify an episode range instead of character arcs.
Pokemon: Win
Adventures of the Mini Goddesses: Concise, zesty, effective. (I flipped a coin. Today was not your lucky day.)
C0MPL3X
08-12-2006, 10:47 PM
o_0 I thought you would all lose yourself in midway through my essay. Although there's a feeling's telling me lazysage's going to turn the tide over at some point.
Mouse
08-20-2006, 12:07 PM
Pokemon wins. Good job Complex.
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