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lucky
07-17-2006, 09:16 PM
[This is my short Vampire story, or some of it. It's in progress right now, but for now, I'll be content sharing this.]

I'm not quite sure how it happened, this...Union if you will. So unnecessary, so unclean yet in the end, it brought me a great deal of happiness. The start, far from conventional. The finish, yet to be decided.

It seems fate had it in for us. Had our numbers called far too early. Had our lives end far too quickly.

The gasp you made was barely audible, your lips quivering as you were brought over. I smiled briefly at it, wondering if you would scream. If you would argue what I was doing.

But you proved to be passive. My fangs helped greatly to silence you it seemed, no more macho manly bravado to be heard from you. I siphoned the blood with a thirst like nothing I had felt before. I wanted you cold in my arms, lifeless for a time as I basked in your glory.

You love, you were my favorite. My favorite toy, my favorite posession. Purely for kicks at the time, and knowing you, you would have it no other way.

My arms held you tight to my chest, my own breathe strained with effort as I avoided draining you dry. Yes, you were cold but you were living even if it was just for a moment longer. A moment was all I needed.

Pulling away with a shiver, I removed one of my arms, leaving you dangling slightly as the other struggled to support your full weight. I raised my freed wrist to my mouth, and knashed my lengthened canines across the vein. The skin ripped at my savage and uneducated attempt to draw blood, but the smell of it hit me first. It swelled in the fleshy pocket I had created in my arm and I quickly moved it to your mouth, letting some drip through your cracked lips.

Your tongue moved up, swiping the wound and I cringed slightly. It hurt ever so slightly, yet raised my high more then I could explain to you. Such a thing, that subtle movement triggered a change in me even I cannot explain. It gave me hope that you indeed wanted this. That you infact thanked me for what I bestowed unto you.

My head bowed, a smirk donned my face and I let out a soft purr of content. This was all I needed, this was it. Setting you down, I ran my own tongue over the bloody wreck that was now my wrist, closing it, and murmured to myself, "This is what it's like to bring life back."

Tbaism
07-17-2006, 09:18 PM
Poetry.

lucky
07-17-2006, 09:20 PM
Heh, I am a poet; Anonymously atleast.

Tbaism
07-17-2006, 09:21 PM
You are out in the open now. Im telling everybody.

lucky
07-17-2006, 09:23 PM
Telling them what? That I enjoy writing even if I'm an amateur? Go for it. Let them laugh. :3

Tbaism
07-17-2006, 09:27 PM
Yes. You seemed to uncover my plan and turned it around. Ill have to submit my own poem to outdo it.



~Very tired. Rambling is in order

lucky
07-17-2006, 09:29 PM
Submit what you want. Might get me in the mood to do the same.

Tbaism
07-17-2006, 09:37 PM
Im out of fresh poems at the moment.

Smoochy smoochy
Bottle of hoochy
Breathless and Crazy
Staring at Dazy
Loving and Tender
Bottoms up
Lets break hit the bed chamber


And I just made that :D

lucky
07-17-2006, 09:43 PM
I count the hours til I reach my destination,
Coming back around to see a few old faces.
I nearly done with my drinking alone,
Got liquor on my mind and it gets me places.
A cigarette hanging from my lips,
The body of a god at arms length
You on my mind, I can't shake this feeling
That maybe you're the key to inner strength.
You say rest awhile,
I say I'm burning up.
I wanna set fires,
You say enoughs enough.
Passed out on the floor,
Feeling what I feel for you,
Got me circling back once or twice,
I'm not sure what to do.
Pissing away my summer with my mind in the gutter,
Almost sure you're ready for one quick run in,
Can't believe I'm saying this but take me now.
I guess it's up to fate to decide if I get to see the sun again.
I'm coming back home,
To a place where I grew.
With a life I never lived,
And a love I never knew.
I'm coming home now,
Pretty presistant to see you again.
My hearts in the right place,
No way I can win.
So, here I come,
There you go.
Sure as I've said before,
You're someone I'll never know.

Topping yours with mine that I just wrote. <3

Tbaism
07-17-2006, 09:47 PM
Ummm its good but can you beat this?

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Something Something
I love you too

Think thats how it went. I put my own little spin on it though

Jeannie
07-17-2006, 09:47 PM
Vampires are cool. Good little story there lucky. Definatly worth the read.

lucky
07-17-2006, 09:51 PM
Much thanks to you Jeannie.

And here's my version of a love poem.

It all started with the red taint of a lie,
Devouring everything we had essentially,
Bringing out the best of me, the worst of me,
All of me that you now see.

Everything.. I believe.
But from this was a cruelity,
Perpetually undying.
Keeping me crying, fighting, hiding.

I hate you.
Not really officially,
And I know eventually,
I won't feel anything.
Not a thing felt by me..

And I hate this.
Well, not to the point of conceit.
I mean, I will not admit defeat..
Need for me to repeat once more or so?
Compete without defeat.

What a moto!
I can hold my head up high,
Touch the sky, and pray you die..
Why? You know why.

Because..
It all starts with the red taint of a lie.

animanic_critic
07-18-2006, 09:31 AM
Poetry is good, but sometimes being too good just ain't my cup of tea. Keep 'em coming: I wanna some one poem that does get my attention...:hyper:

lucky
07-18-2006, 11:43 AM
O.o Thanks. I think...

animanic_critic
07-18-2006, 05:24 PM
lucky: No, yours is just fine, well done, I prefer you type of poetry to those sounding like bad rip-offs of Shakespeare's. Revolting...:blah4:

lucky
07-18-2006, 06:30 PM
Heh, well thanks again. ^^ Yeah, I write it out of boredom alot of time but sometimes I put alittle feeling into it. The effort can infact be worth it.