Stuck in a World of Japanese Animation

[Mr. Otaku]

"Stuck in a World of Japanese Animation" by Mr. Otaku

Our story begins with a guy named Lee. He was so into anime that he gets to watch it whenever he gets a chance. After watching a 24-hour Speed Racer marathon, he decided to eat and go to bed. But, he never realized that he forgot to turn off his TV and there was a brand new episode of Ruroni Kenshin coming up that he forgot. He realized it and rushed upstairs to his room.
Meanwhile, a huge electrical storm was brewing in the town that he lives in. Lee was watching his anime when a lightning bolt hit his window and through his TV. He coming up to it to see what was wrong with it and suddenly, a hand came out of the TV and pulled him in.
"What's wrong with me?", Lee said to himself as he was falling.
"If you want to go back home, you must find the seven daikon keys.", a voice said from afar.
"Why do you want me to find some radishes?", he asked.
"You'll find out soon enough.", the voice said as it faded away.
Lee continued to fall until he hit the ground. He was knocked unconscious.
When he came to, he saw a couple of girls surrounding him. They were the girls from Love Hina. He was surprised, thinking that I might have turned into Keitaro but, Lee was wrong, as usual. He just walked in with a wet washcloth. I looked at the girls and asked them, "Why are you all so red?"
Then, he looked down. HE WASN'T WEARING ANY CLOTHES!
Lee didn't know what happened. Did his clothes get ripped off during the free fall?
"Your clothes are being washed as we speak.", Motoko said as she was sitting down by his side.
But then, Naru was getting angry.
"You FLASHING PERVERT!"
She knocked him back out cold.
While knocked out, Lee had a vision. Somebody appeared in his dream and told him his mission to find the first of 7 Daikon keys.
"You must get Keitaro and Naru together.", the voice said.
"Who are you?", he asked.
"Just your friendly neighborhood otaku.", the voice answered.
I just woke up to see that my clothes are back on. The girls came back as soon as Su told everybody. We all introduced ourselves to one another and became good friends. This was the start of an amazing adventure through anime.

End Chapter One

[Two-twenty]

Mr. Otaku.

Some people who come on to these forums with no intention of contributing are entertaining at least for a little bit. You are not. Stop this world's-biggest-geek gimmick. It's not clever, it's not sad, it's not annoying, it's just really, really stupid. It's painful to read and it's shitting up the forums. Stop. Just stop.

[jetfire]

Arrgghhh! My brain is bleeding!
I agree with Two Twenty. Stop the charade. I'm not really one to bash people, but you need a bit of sense knocked into you. So far, I've only read this thread, and another one of your threads on the anime forum, but you sound like you're seven years old. If you're serious when writing these things, you need a reality check, and I'd suggest some therapy from your local psychiastrist. Some guy getting sucked into his TV, trying to find keys in anime worlds to get out of the TV? Wha? Just accept anime for what it is. An entertainment medium. This whole story reminds me of Spy Kids 3D (Oh my god! Were trapped in a videogame!), and I havent (and have no desire to) see the dumb movie. Why not try writing a real manga/anime story, with your own characters, in their own anime world?

Sorry that I had to get real bold and to the point. I'm just trying to make a suggestion to you, so you don't end up making yourself look very foolish.

[Tyrdium]

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/5986/animedumb5ud.jpg

This whole story reminds me of Spy Kids 3D (Oh my god! Were trapped in a videogame!), and I havent (and have no desire to) see the dumb movie.Do you have something against Tron?!? Yeah, that's what I thought.

[silan]

That's one macro I don't like. What's wrong with model trains?!!

Well, Mr. Otaku, you're not the first person to write self-insertion fanfiction, even though your main character is supposedly a guy named Lee (slips into first person a bit there, so you give yourself away :suspiciou ).... I'm not a fan of it, it reminds me too much of those crazy people who dress up as anime characters and go to conventions ( :D ). But whatever floats your boat.

Or something.

Just don't expect a lot of people to enjoy what you write if that's all you write.

And those are my two cents, posted only because I wanted to complain against the implied insult against model trains.

[Javer]

This is a joke, right?

[jetfire]

Do you have something against Tron?!? Yeah, that's what I thought.

Actually, I've never seen Tron, although I played a Tron level in Kingdom Hearts 2. Even if the concept of being trapped in a game is a bit ridiculous, at least they pulled it off with style, and didn't make it too lame. I mean, Lightbikes are cool. This story is lame.

[Mr. Otaku]

Dude. I was just trying to be creative. I didn't mean for this stuff to happen. I mean, you don't have to be so mean to me and my character, Lee, committed suicide two months before our high school graduation and was my best friend. He was basically obsessed about anime. I thought that this might be a way to honor his memory.

[Javer]

I see.

Well, it's in good spirit then, but if you want to put it online, please write and upload it elsewhere. Someplace where you can access it at will, but it's not distracting people.

Most forums wouldn't be pleased with personal statements or works -- personal in the sense that no one else will understand their significance.

So writing about Lee being randomly dropped into a world of anime and schtupping all the imaginary women he can find is a tribute to his memory?

[Nakamura.Kazuma]

you guys are mean, HIS BEST FEIND DIED AND YOUR BEING MEAN TO HIM YOU DESERVER TO DIE!

im sorry mr otaku, if i had one with i would wish your feind never died

[Saya-biki]

that one line..."Just your friendly neighborhood otaku.", the voice answered. was successful in making me cringe mentally...

you guys are mean, HIS BEST FEIND DIED AND YOUR BEING MEAN TO HIM YOU DESERVER TO DIE!
you sure about that?
100% sure?
I mean...do we know this Lee guy died? Do we know this Lee guy even existed?
Personally I think Mr. Otaku has been messing with us since day 1.

But for the sake of arguement, let's be trustful and say that this Lee guy existed and commited suicide, but why do we deserve to die? Because they commented on the "writing" before they even knew anything? Does that make sense?

I don't think you've even fully read the other posts, I read your other thread, you say you're 14? Well here's some advice for you from someone your own age, it's better to act older than your age, then act younger.
The way you said we should all die is proof of your immaturity.
Fix it.

[jetfire]

I wouldnt even be surprised if this Nakamura.Kazuma guy is really Mr. Otaku, creating another account and covering up for himself, by looking like someone else is defending him. Even if it's not, it's kind of stupid to judge people on being mean to him before he even mentioned his friend. And I don't even think he really has a friend who committed suicide. Because if this story was a tribute to him, Mr. Otaku should have mentioned it in his first post with the story. It'd be pretty important to do so if that was the reason for creating the story. I think the whole suicide story is a cover up to make people be more sympathetic to him. I'm not being completely unsympathetic. If there was proof, I would definately show some sympathy. But it's weird how the aspect of a suicidal friend was brought up RIGHT after people started complaining about the story.

[Ritalin]

I wouldnt even be surprised if this Nakamura.Kazuma guy is really Mr. Otaku, creating another account and covering up for himself, by looking like someone else is defending him. Even if it's not, it's kind of stupid to judge people on being mean to him before he even mentioned his friend. And I don't even think he really has a friend who committed suicide. Because if this story was a tribute to him, Mr. Otaku should have mentioned it in his first post with the story. It'd be pretty important to do so if that was the reason for creating the story. I think the whole suicide story is a cover up to make people be more sympathetic to him. I'm not being completely unsympathetic. If there was proof, I would definately show some sympathy. But it's weird how the aspect of a suicidal friend was brought up RIGHT after people started complaining about the story.

That's because it is the same person. :D

As for the story, it really wasn't that good. Even if your friend died, and this is in his memory, doesn't make the story good. It's a nice thing to do, that's about it...

[Jeannie]

What's really going on here?

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/5986/animedumb5ud.jpg

Do you have something against Tron?!? Yeah, that's what I thought.

That was very... clever. :thumbup:


This is a joke, right?

I hope so...

Dude. I was just trying to be creative. I didn't mean for this stuff to happen. I mean, you don't have to be so mean to me and my character, Lee, committed suicide two months before our high school graduation and was my best friend. He was basically obsessed about anime. I thought that this might be a way to honor his memory.

You just pissed on your friends grave.


you guys are mean, HIS BEST FEIND DIED AND YOUR BEING MEAN TO HIM YOU DESERVER TO DIE!

im sorry mr otaku, if i had one with i would wish your feind never died

I can almost guarantee that 99.9% of the people here would rather be mean than stupid. And just why do I deserve to die because I'm mean to a guy that's had a death impact his life? Dumbass.


that one line..."Just your friendly neighborhood otaku.", the voice answered. was successful in making me cringe mentally...



you sure about that?
100% sure?
I mean...do we know this Lee guy died? Do we know this Lee guy even existed?
Personally I think Mr. Otaku has been messing with us since day 1.

But for the sake of arguement, let's be trustful and say that this Lee guy existed and commited suicide, but why do we deserve to die? Because they commented on the "writing" before they even knew anything? Does that make sense?

I don't think you've even fully read the other posts, I read your other thread, you say you're 14? Well here's some advice for you from someone your own age, it's better to act older than your age, then act younger.
The way you said we should all die is proof of your immaturity.
Fix it.

I completely agree. Also being in the same age catergorey. Nakamura you make me and Saya-Biki look bad.

[Tyrdium]

That's because it is the same person. :DIsn't having multiple accounts a bannable offense?

[Ninja Realist]

Ahem.

I for one found this story both DEEPLY MOVING and HIGHLY INFORMATIVE. I also thought that utilizing a lightning bolt as a plot device was a FRESH and UNEXPECTED twist on a premise that was allready beyond the realm of the MUNDANE or the EXPECTED. In fact I would advise Mr. Otaku to tone down the MIND-BENDING FURY of his story so that it doesn't tear our fragile brains apart.

We can only handle so much boundlessly creative surreality before our brains begin to fall apart Mr. Otaku.

[Jeannie]

Not to mention this person has about 4 accounts now, right? Well, that's what he said on the other thread anyway.

[Ritalin]

Isn't having multiple accounts a bannable offense?

Not always (exceptions being siblings, forgotten password and too stupid to click "Forgot Password?" link, etc), but otherwise this is a prime example of why it is bannable.

I just want to see if it really is him, or someone else on his computer, but the defensive posts make me think it's him... so typical. :p

And since this thread obviously failed and is heading straight for a flame war, I'm gonna close it before things get worse.