lilly1992
06-22-2006, 01:06 PM
( This is my own story i just want your opions, please reply)
Hi, my name is Kayla. People think I’m just an ordinary school girl. I thought I was too until May 26, 2:00 pm.
It started out a normal day; I got up and got ready for school. On my way home I saw my dog, Demon got out again. This time he didn’t just stand there he started to run toward the abandon well. I was worried he might jump in and to my dismay he did.
So I jumped in after him I thought I hit a hard rock floor but I landed on a mat. When I finally woke up I saw a wooden door on the side. So naturally I got up and opened it and walked in.
You would never believe me of what I saw but I’ll tell you any way. I saw trees, flowers, and smoke. I looked up and down for my Dog but I couldn’t find him anywhere.
Before I knew it I was surrounded by people. They were all dressed so weird.
“Can this day get any stranger, I thought”?
They asked what I was doing there.
I said” I was looking for my dog named demon. He is black and white have you seen him?”
“No we have not seen any type of dog around here in ages.” Said the chief priest.
She continues to talk “who are you dear child?”
“Oh, my name is Kayla but you can call me Katara, ok?” I replied.
“Where am I”? I asked
“Dear child you are in the land of wolves and my name is Kyoto” she said.
Here I will take you back to the village so you can rest up.”
“Ok” I replied to Kyoto.
When I saw the village I could only say two word low tec. There were no cars, no phones, and no electricity.
“How could a place be so barren?”
I thought.
When I got inside one of the houses it wasn’t any different from the outside. When they told me to lie on the bed it was soft as silk. She told me to rest easy for the night. I slept all night and part of the day.
Soon as I awoke I heard a howl being muffled by some ones hand. Soon I saw lady Kyoto tying a person with brown hair and wolves tied around him.
I walked over to lady Kyoto, but when she saw me she told me to keep away.
So I walk to the river and stayed there for about an hour or two. After that I headed into town to see what was around.
As soon as I entered the town I saw Kyoto and a few other villagers dragging that person I saw her tying up earlier. I ran up to her to see what she was doing.
As soon as I reached her she told me that this so called thing was really a wolf demon and that he was no different then the wolves he controlled. Kyoto also told me he was a meat eater none the less. She also told me there was another one with this one but he escaped before we could catch him.
“I do believe he will come back to save his comrade.” Said Kyoto.
“Can I help that time then?” I asked
“Well I guess.” she said.
Cool, I said. The demon behind her looked puzzled. After a few minutes of talking to me she started to talk to the demon. She asked him a lot of questions but he wasn’t listening to her. He was looking out the window at me. Well that’s that it looked like.
I went to bed late that night. I was so worried that that wolf demon would get out. For some reason I found a big pair of wolf eyes above me but instead of feeling fur I felt human skin, but when I turned on the light there was nothing there.
“It had to be my imagination” I said in a whisper.
“This is one weird night” I thought.
The next morning I was walking through the woods and found myself surrounded by wolves I got really scared so I yelled and before I knew it I was in someone’s arms moving at the speed of light. Soon I found myself in the village surrounded by everybody looking at me. I wondered whose arms I was in. When I looked up me realized I was in the arms of a wolf demon. He said he would give me back to them in exchange for his comrade he said he was the new leader of the wolf tribe and his name was Kouga.
So they willingly traded me for his comrade but when he tried to put me down but, he couldn’t because his armor had gotten stuck on my shirt so if he put me down my shirt would rip and trust me it would have been a big hole too.
So he told me to unhook me shirt from his armor. So I did as he said and unhooked it from his armor the best I could. Right before he let me go he kisses me on the cheek and right after he did that I punched him in the face and pushed off of him and did a back flip and landed on my feet. As soon as I landed on my feet I wiped his kiss off my cheek.
He just got up from the ground grabbed his partners wrist and ran back into the woods at the speed of light.
When he got back to the cave with his comrade he went into a corner and became very sad and embarrassed that his comrade had seen him get hit by a girl. His comrade went to go comfort him and he promised he would not tell anyone what happened.
His comrade’s name is Haku and he asked why he had kissed me. Kouga told him that there was something diffent about me. His comrade agreed that there was something diffent about me.
I was back at the village trying to hear what Kyoto was telling the men. I had no idea what they were talking about because I thought I was just a normal middle school student going to school and working on studying for tests not fighting any wars. This week couldn’t get any stranger could it?
While the rest of us were sleeping in the village
Kouga was planning. His companion Haku was sleeping.
The next day I got up so early that I thought it was still night. Well I decided since I’m up might as well practice gymnastics. So I did.
I practiced my ground flips forward and backward along with some cartwheels. I decided not to practice my Arial flips because if I fell it would wake someone up. I also practiced botojitsu (A type of sword fighting and hand fighting mixed together.) for a while.
Soon as landed a double back flip I realized Kyoto was watching.
“Oh, no I hope I didn’t wake her up,” I thought.
“What are you doing child,” she asked.
“Nothing” I answered.
“Ok, let’s get you set for you trip.” She said
I wondered what trip she was talking about but, I followed her though to find out. Soon we arrived at a little house she handed me a bag with food and water and a map along with a letter to a priestess in another town. She told me to deliver the letter to her and to return back here. She also told me that I will be riding a horse there and back.
So I headed off knowing it would be a long journey to Pataway (name of other town)
After a few hours I can to a grove of apple trees. Soon I heard a voice and it said…….
“What’s up girl”?
Came the voice, from above.
“Who said that”? I asked.
“I did” said the voice again.
Then a few seconds after whoever said that a boy jumped down out of a tree and landed right in front of me.
“Who are you?” I asked
“I am Ginta, a wolf demon.”
“Sorry but I must be on my way I don’t have time to chat.”
He let me pass. Just in case I decided to get my horse to run as fast as possible.
That night I slept in a tree. As high up as I could get. In the morning I ate a quick breakfast and set of as soon as my horse finished eating. All I could think of was getting to Pataway.
It is the fourth day. I’m so tired. Of all the times to be traveling during summer. Sure its spring back home but its summer here.
An hour or two later I came upon a lake. Being too tired to change I jumped in. I probably should have thought before I did that because I was wearing a white shirt and a pair of blue skirt.
When I got out I realized that my white shirt became see through. I didn’t want to change here in the middle of nowhere in just in case some one was watching so I put a light jacket on. I was only two days from Pataway. I couldn’t wait to get there.
So I got back on my horse and got going. Instead of taking two days it only took me five hours running.
When they saw me they ran for cover. Next thing I knew I was getting shot at with arrows. I naturally dodged them all. I got a few scratches but nothing serious.
“Stop” I yelled.
They stopped shooting and I asked for the priestess of the village. After waiting a while a girl stepped in front of them. I handed her the letter and she read it.
“Oh I am so sorry dear I didn’t know you where sent by Kyoto” she said to me.
“Its ok, I pretty much dodged most of them.”
“Please stay here for the night” she told me.
“Ok” I replied.
So I stayed the night in Pataway. I was worried that the wolf tribe would come here too. After a few minutes of thinking I fell asleep.
In the morning my bag was filled with food. I thanked the villagers and went on my way. It only took a few days to get to the apple tree grove where I meet Ginta. I decided to eat an apple or two while I was their. As soon as I finished my second apple I fell asleep.
When I woke up I was surrounded by wolves.
In the distance I saw something that looked like a tornado. The tornado was moving quiet fast too. In my direction. I tried to run but the wolves surrounded me. I closed my eyes so I wouldn’t get any dust in them. But when I opened them there standing in front of me was none other than Kouga.
“So what have we got here” said Kouga.
“Wolves howl”
“It looks like you boys have been packing on the pounds you defiantly won’t eat her”.
“Oh the nerve of that guy showing up at of nowhere” I thought.
Kouga turns to his out of breath partner Haku.
“Let’s get back to the others, oh yeah and bring some apples back.
“Yes sir,”haku answered.
“Sir, what should I do with the girl”?
“Bring her along I guess.” replied Kouga
Haku told me to stand up. So I did. He asked how fast I can run. Pretty fast I told him.
Good. Follow Kouga. You will be in the middle of us so don’t try to escape he told me. So I followed Kouga. I was in front of Haku the whole time at least.
When Kouga finally stopped I stopped too. I am a really fast kid I said.
“Yeah, yeah whatever.”
Haku finally caught up too me and Kouga.
I kept my distance from Kouga. I just didn’t want
him to kiss me again.
“Kouga where are we going?” I asked in curiosity.
“We are returning to the rest of the tribe”.
“Oh...ok” I replied. Not knowing what to expect next.
Hi, my name is Kayla. People think I’m just an ordinary school girl. I thought I was too until May 26, 2:00 pm.
It started out a normal day; I got up and got ready for school. On my way home I saw my dog, Demon got out again. This time he didn’t just stand there he started to run toward the abandon well. I was worried he might jump in and to my dismay he did.
So I jumped in after him I thought I hit a hard rock floor but I landed on a mat. When I finally woke up I saw a wooden door on the side. So naturally I got up and opened it and walked in.
You would never believe me of what I saw but I’ll tell you any way. I saw trees, flowers, and smoke. I looked up and down for my Dog but I couldn’t find him anywhere.
Before I knew it I was surrounded by people. They were all dressed so weird.
“Can this day get any stranger, I thought”?
They asked what I was doing there.
I said” I was looking for my dog named demon. He is black and white have you seen him?”
“No we have not seen any type of dog around here in ages.” Said the chief priest.
She continues to talk “who are you dear child?”
“Oh, my name is Kayla but you can call me Katara, ok?” I replied.
“Where am I”? I asked
“Dear child you are in the land of wolves and my name is Kyoto” she said.
Here I will take you back to the village so you can rest up.”
“Ok” I replied to Kyoto.
When I saw the village I could only say two word low tec. There were no cars, no phones, and no electricity.
“How could a place be so barren?”
I thought.
When I got inside one of the houses it wasn’t any different from the outside. When they told me to lie on the bed it was soft as silk. She told me to rest easy for the night. I slept all night and part of the day.
Soon as I awoke I heard a howl being muffled by some ones hand. Soon I saw lady Kyoto tying a person with brown hair and wolves tied around him.
I walked over to lady Kyoto, but when she saw me she told me to keep away.
So I walk to the river and stayed there for about an hour or two. After that I headed into town to see what was around.
As soon as I entered the town I saw Kyoto and a few other villagers dragging that person I saw her tying up earlier. I ran up to her to see what she was doing.
As soon as I reached her she told me that this so called thing was really a wolf demon and that he was no different then the wolves he controlled. Kyoto also told me he was a meat eater none the less. She also told me there was another one with this one but he escaped before we could catch him.
“I do believe he will come back to save his comrade.” Said Kyoto.
“Can I help that time then?” I asked
“Well I guess.” she said.
Cool, I said. The demon behind her looked puzzled. After a few minutes of talking to me she started to talk to the demon. She asked him a lot of questions but he wasn’t listening to her. He was looking out the window at me. Well that’s that it looked like.
I went to bed late that night. I was so worried that that wolf demon would get out. For some reason I found a big pair of wolf eyes above me but instead of feeling fur I felt human skin, but when I turned on the light there was nothing there.
“It had to be my imagination” I said in a whisper.
“This is one weird night” I thought.
The next morning I was walking through the woods and found myself surrounded by wolves I got really scared so I yelled and before I knew it I was in someone’s arms moving at the speed of light. Soon I found myself in the village surrounded by everybody looking at me. I wondered whose arms I was in. When I looked up me realized I was in the arms of a wolf demon. He said he would give me back to them in exchange for his comrade he said he was the new leader of the wolf tribe and his name was Kouga.
So they willingly traded me for his comrade but when he tried to put me down but, he couldn’t because his armor had gotten stuck on my shirt so if he put me down my shirt would rip and trust me it would have been a big hole too.
So he told me to unhook me shirt from his armor. So I did as he said and unhooked it from his armor the best I could. Right before he let me go he kisses me on the cheek and right after he did that I punched him in the face and pushed off of him and did a back flip and landed on my feet. As soon as I landed on my feet I wiped his kiss off my cheek.
He just got up from the ground grabbed his partners wrist and ran back into the woods at the speed of light.
When he got back to the cave with his comrade he went into a corner and became very sad and embarrassed that his comrade had seen him get hit by a girl. His comrade went to go comfort him and he promised he would not tell anyone what happened.
His comrade’s name is Haku and he asked why he had kissed me. Kouga told him that there was something diffent about me. His comrade agreed that there was something diffent about me.
I was back at the village trying to hear what Kyoto was telling the men. I had no idea what they were talking about because I thought I was just a normal middle school student going to school and working on studying for tests not fighting any wars. This week couldn’t get any stranger could it?
While the rest of us were sleeping in the village
Kouga was planning. His companion Haku was sleeping.
The next day I got up so early that I thought it was still night. Well I decided since I’m up might as well practice gymnastics. So I did.
I practiced my ground flips forward and backward along with some cartwheels. I decided not to practice my Arial flips because if I fell it would wake someone up. I also practiced botojitsu (A type of sword fighting and hand fighting mixed together.) for a while.
Soon as landed a double back flip I realized Kyoto was watching.
“Oh, no I hope I didn’t wake her up,” I thought.
“What are you doing child,” she asked.
“Nothing” I answered.
“Ok, let’s get you set for you trip.” She said
I wondered what trip she was talking about but, I followed her though to find out. Soon we arrived at a little house she handed me a bag with food and water and a map along with a letter to a priestess in another town. She told me to deliver the letter to her and to return back here. She also told me that I will be riding a horse there and back.
So I headed off knowing it would be a long journey to Pataway (name of other town)
After a few hours I can to a grove of apple trees. Soon I heard a voice and it said…….
“What’s up girl”?
Came the voice, from above.
“Who said that”? I asked.
“I did” said the voice again.
Then a few seconds after whoever said that a boy jumped down out of a tree and landed right in front of me.
“Who are you?” I asked
“I am Ginta, a wolf demon.”
“Sorry but I must be on my way I don’t have time to chat.”
He let me pass. Just in case I decided to get my horse to run as fast as possible.
That night I slept in a tree. As high up as I could get. In the morning I ate a quick breakfast and set of as soon as my horse finished eating. All I could think of was getting to Pataway.
It is the fourth day. I’m so tired. Of all the times to be traveling during summer. Sure its spring back home but its summer here.
An hour or two later I came upon a lake. Being too tired to change I jumped in. I probably should have thought before I did that because I was wearing a white shirt and a pair of blue skirt.
When I got out I realized that my white shirt became see through. I didn’t want to change here in the middle of nowhere in just in case some one was watching so I put a light jacket on. I was only two days from Pataway. I couldn’t wait to get there.
So I got back on my horse and got going. Instead of taking two days it only took me five hours running.
When they saw me they ran for cover. Next thing I knew I was getting shot at with arrows. I naturally dodged them all. I got a few scratches but nothing serious.
“Stop” I yelled.
They stopped shooting and I asked for the priestess of the village. After waiting a while a girl stepped in front of them. I handed her the letter and she read it.
“Oh I am so sorry dear I didn’t know you where sent by Kyoto” she said to me.
“Its ok, I pretty much dodged most of them.”
“Please stay here for the night” she told me.
“Ok” I replied.
So I stayed the night in Pataway. I was worried that the wolf tribe would come here too. After a few minutes of thinking I fell asleep.
In the morning my bag was filled with food. I thanked the villagers and went on my way. It only took a few days to get to the apple tree grove where I meet Ginta. I decided to eat an apple or two while I was their. As soon as I finished my second apple I fell asleep.
When I woke up I was surrounded by wolves.
In the distance I saw something that looked like a tornado. The tornado was moving quiet fast too. In my direction. I tried to run but the wolves surrounded me. I closed my eyes so I wouldn’t get any dust in them. But when I opened them there standing in front of me was none other than Kouga.
“So what have we got here” said Kouga.
“Wolves howl”
“It looks like you boys have been packing on the pounds you defiantly won’t eat her”.
“Oh the nerve of that guy showing up at of nowhere” I thought.
Kouga turns to his out of breath partner Haku.
“Let’s get back to the others, oh yeah and bring some apples back.
“Yes sir,”haku answered.
“Sir, what should I do with the girl”?
“Bring her along I guess.” replied Kouga
Haku told me to stand up. So I did. He asked how fast I can run. Pretty fast I told him.
Good. Follow Kouga. You will be in the middle of us so don’t try to escape he told me. So I followed Kouga. I was in front of Haku the whole time at least.
When Kouga finally stopped I stopped too. I am a really fast kid I said.
“Yeah, yeah whatever.”
Haku finally caught up too me and Kouga.
I kept my distance from Kouga. I just didn’t want
him to kiss me again.
“Kouga where are we going?” I asked in curiosity.
“We are returning to the rest of the tribe”.
“Oh...ok” I replied. Not knowing what to expect next.