Mistakes of Youth-- My Webcomic

[wildarmsheero]

Yeah, so I started this new comic called Mistakes of Youth. I guess you could say it's the follow up to a previous comic of mine, as it has the same characters and such-- but this new comic has a strong focus on hardcore anime fandom.

Seven comics are up; they should give you a good taste of where I'm trying to take this thing. Please comment/crit on the art and even the writing (I am not that confident with my writing.)

[Tyrdium]

Wow. That be some impressive art there.

As for the writing, I thought comics 2 and 5 in particular were best. It's all pretty decent, although perhaps a bit... otakuish? Though that does appear to be the theme of the comic.

Oh, and I would get rid of the entry page and change index2.php to index.php. Entry pages always struck me as annoying and pointless. But that's just a nitpick.

Overall, though, very nice! I'll be following your comic from now on.

Edit: Huh, reference guide. Very neat! There were a few I missed.

[Linuts]

You artwork has improved considerably yet again! I haven't been keeping up with other webcomics for a while now. I really should :p.

Anyway, I'm adding you to my links next time ^^.

I have to agree with Tyrdium though with regards to the Otaku theme. It's good so far. Let's see how you're gonna keep it up ^^.

[aeroshadow]

I doubt this will be helpful, but...

Hilarious: 2, 5
Amusing: 6, 7
Meh: 1, 3, 4

I really love it when that male character gets really angry. I don't know, but the way you draw his face makes me laugh like every time.

[wildarmsheero]

It does help, actually. The amount of people who like number 2 surprises me, given that one member of my staff hated it, heh.

[AqueousMessage]

Oh man, I haven't seen you in forever! And your style has surely bumped up a few levels. I'll be keeping an eye on you to see how you futher progress yourself and the comic.