Student Review Contest #2

[Scoot]

The first was just the warm-up.

Now the real battle begins.

You've had time to massage your aching wrists by now, so here goes Student Review Rumble: Second Semester.

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A mutually advantageous conjunction where the whole is greater than the sum of the parts. [wikipedia] (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Synergy)

That's right, the best word in the world is back in Student Review Competition form, and the title you choose to review must contain at least one element of synergy - or anti-synergy, where parts of the series combine to produce something more than its constituent parts - or conversely the sum of an anime is decidedly less than its components (you can see an example in my Shakugan no Shana review).

Also, as an incentive to gain more entrants, I am offering a prize of one Terry's Chocolate Orange (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chocolate_orange) to the winner - which I will mail to you. Please note that I take no responsibility of the condition of said chocolate orange on arrival. Especially if you live somewhere hot.

Deadline for entries: 21st May 2006

Rules (stolen from previous SRC):

1. One entry per person.
2. Only completed anime can be reviewed.
3. Reviews that are posted after the two week deadline will be disqualified.
4. Entries are final. Once a review is posted no more editing is allowed, regardless of whether it is still before the deadline.
5. The winner chooses the next theme and hosts the next contest.
6. Reviews must include at least a title, review, summary and grade.
7. The review and summary must be written by you.
8. No entering a review that has previously been entered in an Anime Academy Student Review Contest.
9. Fully clarify your theme. Do not be vague or over restrictive.
10. Chocolate orange may be exchanged for another confectionary of equal or less price. But not money.

Guidelines
1. While it is not mandatory, including series details such as title alternatives; genre; company; format; dates; highs and lows; screenshots and a captioned screenshot, are looked upon favourably.
2. The preferred word count is about 300-500 words, as per the Anime Academy main page.
3. Previously written reviews are allowed to be entered as long as they don't break rule #8.

Let the games begin...


-Addition 1: Some have asked me for a more thorough explanation of the theme word, which I will now attempt: Synergy in this sense is when the parts of an anime series, taken by themselves are not as pleasing/affecting or effective as when they are put together to create the final piece.

This can be taken in a technical sense, when for example the writing, seiyuu, animation etc are of a certain standard, but when put together, the final result is something even more (or less) impressive.

There are numerous other ways you can interpret the theme, and part of this contest will be judging how successfully (or originally) you have done so. Here (http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=synergy) are (http://www.answers.com/synergy.?nafid=3) some (http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/synergy) references (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Synergy).

[A-R@D]

A Chocolate Orange as the prize! I'm in.

[Zelkiiro]

Hmm...basically, a seemingly multi-part anime where it all comes together in the end? I think I know of one... :D

[Zen of Anime]

BLOOD: The Last Vampire
A Review by Matt_S

Licensed by: SME Visual Works Inc.

Produced by: Manga Entertainment and I.G.

Genres: Horror Supernatural Thriller

Age Rating: M for Mature Contains Extreme Graphic Violence, Brief Nudity and Strong Language

Plot Summary: The Vietnam War is on they up-rise South East Asia, the United States Air Base in Yokota Japan uknowingly is under a threat far greater than war: Teropterids. Teropterids are Demonic creature’s that live only to feed off human blood. They take the form of a human by day but can transform into their true being at will. Anyone who se’s there true form must die. A dark and mysterious girl named Saya is the best Teropterid Slayer there is and she is sent in by undercover agents to kill the Teropterids.

Run Time: 83 minutes

The movie itself featuring brilliant character designs, top-notch animation and a stunning musical score, BLOOD: The Last Vampire is a breakthrough in digital filmmaking, taking anime to a whole new level. It also Includes a Bonus Documentary on the making of: BLOOD: The Last Vampire.

I personaly have this to say: “It’s a revolutionary Thriller which shall inspire Future Animator’s for generation’s to come.”

Over All I Give It: A 9.8 out of 10. Or in other words a: A.

[A-R@D]

the louder someone shouts "I'm not a crook" the less I believe them.

[Zen of Anime]

Richard Nixion, very good you know you people.

[L-sama]

Ok then...a question for Scoot before I give an attempt. In regards to Rule #8, could I revamp my student review for Evangelion (see the archives here), since I have not used that review in any contest, and use it in this contest?

[Scoot]

Ok then...a question for Scoot before I give an attempt. In regards to Rule #8, could I revamp my student review for Evangelion (see the archives here), since I have not used that review in any contest, and use it in this contest?

Yes - as long as you rework it to communicate how the anime displays an element of the theme then there is no problem.

[L-sama]

Anime: Neon Genesis Evangelion, AKA Shinseiki Evangelion
Genre: Action/Drama
Company: Gainax
Format: 26 episode TV series
Dates: 10/4/1995 to 3/28/1996


In the year 2015, Shinji Ikari, a lonely 14-year-old boy, is summoned under unknown circumstances by his father, the head of the elite and top-secret organization known as NERV. His purpose: to pilot the massive mecha known as Evangelion, the last hope for the earth against interstellar enemies called the Angels. What are the Angels, and why was Shinji specifically called upon to save humankind?

Score: 74%

Highs: Good score; imaginative mecha designs; the battles
Lows: Some battles not for the faint of heart; overuse of stills; logic-defying symbolism and ending


Review: If ever there was a series that was able to make the world stop and take notice, Evangelion is that series. However, it’s not all for good reasons.

The first thing that makes this series stand out is, obviously, the mecha designs. I’m still hard-pressed to find another series with mecha concepts as radical and innovative as the Evas. What’s even more impressive is seeing these metallic giants in action. Fights with the Angels are well thought out and enjoyable while being accompanied by a driving and well-composed soundtrack. However, as the series progresses, some of these battles became quite gruesome. Those who become squeamish fairly easily, myself included, are advised to avert their eyes on some occasions. Outside of these instances, the action here is well represented.

For a ten-year-old series, the animation is pretty good. That is, until the second half of the series. Still shots with voice-overs became an all too common occurrence in a hurry. Going from an action filled scene to a one-shot view for nearly two minutes at a time made the series feel uneven and look hastily done. Character analysis and development as well as symbolism are most definitely not at a premium here. But too much of a good thing can be bad. Apparently, the staff of Evangelion never received that memo. Knowing the motives and backgrounds of nearly EVERY major and semi-major character was very overwhelming at times. Most viewers will also not be able to grasp all of the Christian symbolism the first time around. So, a second and sometimes a third viewing are almost necessary to be able to grasp everything.

Then, we have the finale. Evangelion’s other claim to fame. With so much happening in the first 24 episodes and only two left to finish everything, the task of wrapping up the series was a daunting one for the producers. Their solution: more stills, many of them reused from previous episodes in the series, and random images to represent even more mind-boggling symbolism. Couple that with dialogue from a collegial Freudian psychology seminar and you have the Coup-de-Gras of controversial and downright confusing endings.

Neon Genesis Evangelion is, by no means, a bad series. It’s just not the best one either. In terms of whether this series is synergetic or not, there really is no set answer. Some will say it is; others will disagree. Personally, I do feel that Neon Genesis Evangelion’s parts do add up to a sum. It’s just not the sum it could have been.




Well, there you have it. My first entry in this contest! I hope it answers and sticks to the theme! Best of luck to everyone else!! :)

[Two-twenty]

I made a small mistake in the contest rules that's been bugging me:
6. Reviews must involve at least a title, review, summary and grade.
Could you change 'involve' to 'include' for me.

Anyways, very good theme, Scoot. Count me in.

[Scoot]

Fixed. Its nice to hear people's intentions of competing - it spurs others on to produce better work - so if you intend to submit a review... tell us!

It will also give me a clue as to whether a semi-final will be neccasary this time (which personally I hope it will).

[ShinoMatrix]

You know me...

Beam me up, Scotty!

[7Raven7]

Blue Gender
83%

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g179/7_Raven_7/Blue20Gender01049.jpg
Cue the 2001:A Space Odyssey music.
Highs:
Perfect story and atmosphere for horror,
character development, moving action
and touching drama.

Lows:
Inconsistent animation, pacing identity
crisis, one completely skip-able episode.


Title: Blue Gender
Genre: Horror/Action
Comapany: AIC/Toshiba-EMI
Format: 26 episodes
Dates: 10/8/1999 to 3/31/2000


Synopsis:
The Year is 2031. Earth faces the danger of extinction by a new monstrous species known as the Blue. After being cryogenically frozen for an incurable disease, Yugi Kaido is awaken in the hallways of a once research lab, now Blue nest. He is met by Marlene Angel, part of a special detachment sent down from Second Earth, man’s new home in orbiting space colonies. Her orders: bring back as many “sleepers” to Second Earth as possible. As Yugi learns how to survive on this deadly planet, Marlene leads them to their destination where the secret of Yugi’s awakening awaits to be revealed.

Review:
Similar to how in cooking the inexperienced should be kept from adding too many ingredients less they spoil a meal, so a series needs to take great care in establishing its identity, story and characters amid multiple elements. But in the hands of the right chef, a work like Blue Gender can turn out to be a tasty treat. Bugs anyone?

This should be a very stereotypical anime with the large number of reused themes found among a variety of titles. What makes Blue Gender unique is that it thoroughly weaves in an element of horror, much absent in the industry at large. Absolutely nowhere is safe. In what is one of the best character developments I have seen, Yuji and Marlene struggle through the nightmare around them which will have you holding a flyswatter ready for the next monster to jump up. Both transform completely from when we first meet them. While not what I would consider actual songs, the OST provides a hypnotic blend of haunting melodies that help create the perfect atmosphere for terror. Add to that some action packed mecha battles. Add dramatic overdoses in not knowing who will live or die mixed with the scars worn by those who survive. Add lulls and peaks in the suspense, brilliant scriptwriting, and the overwhelming feelings of fear, loss and relief. Together this series is a masterpiece of well thought-out storytelling and elemental synergy.

Were the animation quality throughout like that during the opening song there would be very little to critique. Animation wise, some moments dazzle onscreen along with some spectacular “splatter” effects. Others received considerably less attention and it is this inconsistency that really draws away from the series. It's very distracting to see detailed, flying mechs dismember large insects (complete with detailed entrails) followed by various still motion pans. Also, while the benefits of being well-rounded are to have each element work to make the whole greater than the sum of its parts, here it sacrifices establishing a firm identity and the pacing is effected most. Without identity, a fan is unsure of what to expect out of a series. Altogether too much of the series was filled with downtime and dramatic imagery between the intense, gory battles and gripping horror and this will lose some viewers. There also is one episode which had overgenerous fan service and adds next to nothing to the story. Why is it whenever a company feels a risky project that they undertook might not pay up they throw in gratuitous sexuality to boost their stock? For shame.

Still, I was not too distracted from the world this series brought me into. Some may be turned off by the mature nature of the violence and depravity displayed in this series. There also is no hiding that it has less than one tenth the budget of Evangelion. Even so, this is a perfect example of an anime done right. Ignore some of the cheesy animation, skip the episode and watch the series.

Score Breakdown:
Characters / Development: 9
Music, Seiyuu and Sound Effects: 8.5
Art, Animation and Cinematography: 7
Story, Plot, Theme and Symbolism: 8.5
The Big Picture: 8.5
(scores + together / 50 * 100 = %)

[Scoot]

This is shaping up to be a great competition - keep them coming.

And for those of you who haven't entered yet... here's a little reminder of what's on offer:

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/scoot123/terrypeppermint-lg.jpg

Yum!

[ShinoMatrix]

They're not Terry's... they're mine :D

(yeah, I'm prioritizing here... gotta make my wallpaper of the month thing first before I do anything for this :p)

[chaste Angel]

Two of these people participating have editted thier stuff, would they still be qualified?

[Psiknight]

That's fine. I'll pull my review...I mindlessly went back and changed a font size.

[Scoot]

Well, if that's all you changed then I don't intend to be a jobsworth about it - just resubmit and we'll be more strict in the future as people become more accustomed to the rules.

[7Raven7]

Yeah, I say keep it in. It's only the second competition and I don't think anyone will mind if you just repost it in it's original format (and like Scoot said, it's not a big deal if the only thing changed was font as it doesn't actually change the review). And I'm sure everyone is looking for many extra/new people participating this time anyway, shame to drive them away on a technicality.

Edit: That being said, rules are important. Don't let it happen again! ;)

[chaste Angel]

Hmm... You people are nicer than i thought.

Glad to hear there are some considerations for newcomers here.

Keep the competition heating up!

[Tremolo]

BLOOD: The Last Vampire
A Review by Matt_S

Licensed by: SME Visual Works Inc.

Produced by: Manga Entertainment and I.G.

Genres: Horror Supernatural Thriller

Age Rating: M for Mature Contains Extreme Graphic Violence, Brief Nudity and Strong Language

Plot Summary: The Vietnam War is on they up-rise South East Asia, the United States Air Base in Yokota Japan uknowingly is under a threat far greater than war: Teropterids. Teropterids are Demonic creature’s that live only to feed off human blood. They take the form of a human by day but can transform into their true being at will. Anyone who se’s there true form must die. A dark and mysterious girl named Saya is the best Teropterid Slayer there is and she is sent in by undercover agents to kill the Teropterids.

Run Time: 83 minutes

The movie itself featuring brilliant character designs, top-notch animation and a stunning musical score, BLOOD: The Last Vampire is a breakthrough in digital filmmaking, taking anime to a whole new level. It also Includes a Bonus Documentary on the making of: BLOOD: The Last Vampire.

I personaly have this to say: “It’s a revolutionary Thriller which shall inspire Future Animator’s for generation’s to come.”

Over All I Give It: A 9.8 out of 10. Or in other words a: A.

Good lord, this is the most useless review I've ever seen. You've basically copied and pasted what looks like the back of the DVD summary mixed with information from Anime News Network and added one paltry sentence of your own, finishing off with a ridiculous rating scale. I'm surprised no one's actually brought up any issue with this so far and I reckon it should be disqualified. It makes a mockery of the people who are actually going to put effort into their reviews. And it's got NOTHING to do with the topic at hand.

[chaste Angel]

Good lord, this is the most useless review I've ever seen. You've basically copied and pasted what looks like the back of the DVD summary mixed with information from Anime News Network and added one paltry sentence of your own, finishing off with a ridiculous rating scale. I'm surprised no one's actually brought up any issue with this so far and I reckon it should be disqualified. It makes a mockery of the people who are actually going to put effort into their reviews. And it's got NOTHING to do with the topic at hand.

... I also noticed same thing. He didnt make a stand on how the anime is related to the theme. But i think SCOOT still has the authority, to disqualify a participating review or object further misleading prosecution.

Well, with your uproar, we'll hear from him sooner or later.

[7Raven7]

While I here you loud and clear Trem, I think the "suggestions" were waiting until after the end of the competition just to be fair.

Again, while I think the idea is to have quality reviews, beggars cannot be choosers. I would encourage all those who want to be a part of the competition to at least try one, after all none of us are exactly columnists for the Times either. We will try not flame you... much. ;)

That being said, everyone should put time and serious thought into their review. Some of us literally read and re-read our reviews 5-10 times. Proper respect can be shown by putting as much time in writing a review yourself, imagine me submitting an entry for Wallpaper of the Month with only my kindergarten knowledge of MS paint and some stick figures. As a side note, remember the same thing at the end of the contest when you critique other's reviews and show respect to those who put time and effort into their review.

The standard high school heading paragraph, body, conclusion formula might be a good place to start if you're worried about what you are submitting. And try to have a main idea or sentence to each paragraph with others supporting it. Also, I don't think I noticed a "no plagiarism" rule and I think we should throw that into effect next review contest (there is a "reviews must be written by yourself" rule, but we may want to clarify just in case someone wants to use a quote or saying that they should identify their source as not themselves).

[Psiknight]

Good lord, this is the most useless review I've ever seen. You've basically copied and pasted what looks like the back of the DVD summary mixed with information from Anime News Network and added one paltry sentence of your own, finishing off with a ridiculous rating scale. I'm surprised no one's actually brought up any issue with this so far and I reckon it should be disqualified. It makes a mockery of the people who are actually going to put effort into their reviews. And it's got NOTHING to do with the topic at hand.

Ever consider trying a bit of tact? Maybe some positive criticism? All of your posts are so damned negative. Try leaving your room, getting some of that pent up aggression out and moving away from your antisocial behavior (as evident from your own profile).

[Tremolo]

Ever consider trying a bit of tact? Maybe some positive criticism? All of your posts are so damned negative. Try leaving your room, getting some of that pent up aggression out and moving away from your antisocial behavior (as evident from your own profile).

Is this what it feels like...to be owned? :(

Just because I made a point about the DVD burner thing in your BECK thread, this is clearly ZOMGRETRIBUTION. It's bad to hold a grudge. ;)

Honestly though, my point was perfectly valid, I'm sure you don't disagree with that, however sternly I put it. Fact is, I'm not angry or antisoscial or agresssive (I just don't stand for crap or bullshit), but it IS irritating in comparison to the effort that the other reviewers have gone to in the previous competition and the new reviews in this thread. It's kind of like a "**** you" to people who care about their writing, and being a reviewer myself I guess it just touched a nerve. If you think I'm being tactless, fair enough, but I'd rather get my point across than be faux-polite.

[7Raven7]

I happen to like some people's anti-social behavior, damn it!

[Scoot]

Ok this thread is not really for discussion about the reviews themselves, but for the submissions - whatever the quality - and questions/comments about the contest in general. The more the merrier.

Once the submission deadline is up, and I start the voting process, everyone will have a chance to share their opinions on a certain review/reviews - good or bad (I really don't care much either for tiptoeing around people's feelings - but I'll always be fair).

[chaste Angel]

Ok this thread is not really for discussion about the reviews themselves, but for the submissions - whatever the quality - and questions/comments about the contest in general. The more the merrier.

Once the submission deadline is up, and I start the voting process, everyone will have a chance to share their opinions on a certain review/reviews - good or bad (I really don't care much either for tiptoeing around people's feelings - but I'll always be fair).

Certainly not the post i wanted to read.

I am expecting you to facilitate the contest, restricting any voilations, clarifying rules, and deciding wether ones acts/reviews are qualified or not.

The more the merrier, partly right, but should we accept a thousand more of such works?

Clarifying after the contest wouldnt help anyone.

For SCOOT only

Dont you think they should have a stand in thier review regarding with its connection to the theme?

Just a thought I have in mind.

[Scoot]

After reading certain submissions my initial thoughts were that they did not convey the theme to a level which would be adequate for myself.

However, since one of the primary voting criteria is how well a review carries through the contest theme, I felt that any review which didn't do so would not come high in the results anyway, and as such it should not be required to forcefully remove such a review, i.e. through disqualification.

I am here to clarify questions and settle disputes regarding the contest, however I feel it is not up to me to make a decision on how well a review connects with the theme - I'll leave that up to the voting.

[chaste Angel]

After reading certain submissions my initial thoughts were that they did not convey the theme to a level which would be adequate for myself.

However, since one of the primary voting criteria is how well a review carries through the contest theme, I felt that any review which didn't do so would not come high in the results anyway, and as such it should not be required to forcefully remove such a review, i.e. through disqualification.

I am here to clarify questions and settle disputes regarding the contest, however I feel it is not up to me to make a decision on how well a review connects with the theme - I'll leave that up to the voting.

Well said.

Sorry for agitating you for such small matters.

Glad to have a wise non-bias person running the competition.

KEEP YOUR REVIEWS COMMING!

[7Raven7]

Time is ticking away and I have yet to see a Scoot or Shino review. Psiknight, you should repost yours and Trem, you sounded like you were ready to go. 7 would be a better turn out than our measly 3!

And to all you other peeps considering the chocolate orange, remember, procrastinators never prosper.

[Rove]

Time is ticking away and I have yet to see a Scoot or Shino review. Psiknight, you should repost yours and Trem, you sounded like you were ready to go. 7 would be a better turn out than our measly 3!

And to all you other peeps considering the chocolate orange, remember, procrastinators never prosper.

Scoot cannot participate because he is the host this time, but you could replace him with Two-twenty, who promised to "kick all our butts by showing us how awesome he is". Quoted for emphasis. :D

I don't think I'll participate this time (haven't seen much anime these last two weeks, not that anyone cares) but just in case I want to pull another "few hours before deadline", when's the last day to submit a review?

[Scoot]

The deadline for reviews is by the end of Sunday, 21st May. Due to timezone differences I will allow a further 12 hours past the deadline in GMT+0 time, so that there are no problems with submissions (Basically, wherever you are, if your calender reads the 22nd then you are too late).

And Rove, however will you prove that you can write a review without reading mine first unless you enter this one? ;) As they say in anime... Chance!

[Two-twenty]

Scoot cannot participate because he is the host this time, but you could replace him with Two-twenty, who promised to "kick all our butts by showing us how awesome he is". Quoted for emphasis. :D

I don't think I'll participate this time (haven't seen much anime these last two weeks, not that anyone cares) but just in case I want to pull another "few hours before deadline", when's the last day to submit a review?
I'll probably be pulling the 'few hours before deadline' thing as well. I have the review half done but I've been very busy this week (damn professional writing assignment/kanji test/Australian 2006 budget opinion poll/broken-down scooter/assorted moving-house bullshit/adorable, attention-seeking kitten that attacks my legs everytime I walk around the house http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v486/Twotwenty/argh.gif).

[ShinoMatrix]

Yeah... same excuse as Two-twenty except replace his lame reasons with more nerdy and socially useful ones :XD:

Y' know I luv ya dude :XD:

[chaste Angel]

Title: Full Metal Panic! The Second Raid
Genre: Action/Drama
Company: Kadokawa Shoten/WOWOW/Kyoto Animation
Format: 13 episodes
Dates: 7/13/2005 to 10/19/2005

Source: AA’s Library
Edited for some purposes/reasons
[Shall be established later]
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Synopsis:

Continuing their virtue, Mithril pursuits any terrorist group whom might use the forbidden black technology to drastically alter the balance of power present in the world. Having confirmed an enemy base camp, Mithril operatives moves on to action. Carrying out the mission they must assault all hostile units with in the area and secure the refugees to safety. Everything is moving swiftly and as planned until the Tuatha de Danaan announces that a bird is down. Knowing that Mithril’s aircrafts are not ordinary, they possess this so called ECS device which makes them not visible to human eyes and for sure impossible to hit by a normal missile, they acknowledge a threat more than they have expected. Dealing with a great problem, choppers can’t fly to rescue nor reinforce the deployed units, does Sgt. Sagara has what it takes to save his fellow comrades?

At last, the anonymous terrorist group lurking within the shadows of the earth will unveil its identity. But do our heroes have the guts to survive the upcoming war?

Summary by ~Fraye

Review:

A military minded and socially naïve sergeant whose mission is to protect a short tempered athletic girl whose longing for a high school love affair was sent to the school same as the heroine to accomplish his sole purpose. Surrounded by circumstances such as a handsome pervert comrade, an overly smoking mature female officer, a dumb witty principal agreeing in everything that he says, an inept arm slave equipped with the most advance technological device called lambda drive, three crazy psychotic antagonists and lastly a 16 year old beautiful gorgeous captain who has a crush on him, everything would not be easy.

Full Metal Panic (TSR) having all this tons hilarious elements, could have been better in comedy series? I don’t think so. With the help of great animations, mecha designs and deep detailed story plot Full Metal Panic (TSR) made it snow under the summer sun.

Starting with an amazing display of fireworks, it manages to focus on a certain plot where the road of action and drama collides. High caliber action scenes were made thoroughly without a pause making the viewers hold their breath until the fight comes to an end. Mithril having the disadvantage against a strong enemy, its high ranking officials comes to a decision, issuing Sgt. Sagara a new mission and leave the on going task to a wraith. Unwillingly, he followed the order and thus giving a twist to the series, developing the next episodes into a heart depressing drama drawn by Sagara finding himself at streets of Hong Kong longing for something he wanted, not knowing his true feelings.

And then, the only thing I hated in this series happened. A new character was presented, an annoyingly Kaname Chidori clone, same figure, same hair color and style, only a few details of her face was altered. Come on guys, they could possibly have created a new one, right? And not ruin Kaname’s adorable face.

Setting that aside, after the final battle which would decide if the country would be a sea of flames or not, Full Metal Panic (TSR) was completed in an action drama format with flying colors. Indeed, the experience you will have is not a rolling on the floor laughing one, but just a little sincere smile telling that this series is getting better and probably, when completed, would be the best.

Minor flaws such as “it could have been better with a few tweaks” and reused sound track are considerable and I do think that the companies involve have done the right thing. Reused tracks made those series look like a single one when played continuously. And the few minor tweaks? Such as a kiss or a simple holding hands? Come on guys, I couldn’t think of any better ending than that, I want to see it at the end of the whole Full Metal Panic Series. The anime could have died if they did it too early. Basically, I don’t want that to happen.

To sum it up, Full Metal Panic (TSR) had overcome those hilarious laughing elements and manages to take a new form as a breath taking action packed heart warming drama series. Let’s see, tons of laughing elements + a socially naïve male lead + a hot headed female lead + a useless most advance mecha = an action/drama series? How did it happen? I don’t know, let us just give thanks and praise the ones who where behind this production for their ingenious work. THANKS FOR A JOB WELL DONE.

Entry by ~Fraye

Grade:

Certainly higher than His and Her Circumstances, 89 would be a good one because I don’t think Kare Kano would get as high as 87 for me. Woops… Making a hint on my next review here.

As for why? Well, both series are incomplete considering that The Second Raid is just a part of the whole Full Metal Panic Series and Kare Kano has only a partially finished manga to base the anime from. Even though, their difference can be highly seen after finishing their whole. A closing remark is a very important phase of a presentation; it could make or break a good impression. In Full Metal Panic (TSR), they have done it fairly without demolishing the room for the next series, while for the latter… no further statement is needed. I will put it in my next project.

All by ~Fraye
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As one would notice, its genre has been edited from Action/Comedy/Drama to Action/Drama.

Reason: A minute of laugher and cheer does not make a series fall under comedy genre.
[In Full Metal Panic (TSR), laughing moments are only used to further mark the entrance of a dramatic conflict or as a resolution to said conflict.]

Purpose: To Elaborate and bring emphasize on how Full Metal Panic (TSR) had ignored its comedic elements and focused on a certain dramatic plot. [Literary, if the word comedy is written there, it would prove me wrong of what I am trying to convey and narrow minded persons would accuse me of lying or making fools out of them.]

My first review,
~Fraye

[Scoot]

Not long left now, so if you haven't started writing a review - you know what you have to do.

For everyone who doesn't enter... I blend a kitten.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/scoot123/stalking-kitten.jpg

[chaste Angel]

Oh my!

Sorry lil' kitten. I did my best. Hope they will too.

SCOOT!

Isn't this unfair? A cute innocent kitten paying others imprudence?

I am really feeling bad about blend a kitten.

[ShinoMatrix]

RahXephon: Pluralitis Concentio

Quick Facts
Licensed: YES
Format: 1 Movie
Made by: Bones (directed by Yutaka Izubuchi from Gasaraki and the Gundam franchise)
Worth noting: This is a Yoko Kanno/Maaya Sakamoto music domain anime...
Rating: 76%

Pros:
* Neatly wrapped up summary.
* Thoughtful drama.

Cons:
* Possibly too crunched up.
* Not really a new thing but just a summary of the series


At a glance:
Kamina Ayato and Mishima Haruka are the hero and heroine of this movie just as they were in the series. The story is of their separation after the attack by the Mu, a race from a different plane of reality to ours. Tokyo is engulfed inside a barrier that not only separated it from the outside world but also from time and reality. Each find themselves on the opposite side. Now with the help of Shitow Haruka, an agent from TERRA, can Ayato find the love that he lost?

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Most people tell me that to fully appreciate this, it is best to have seen the complete series first. This sounds logical enough seeing as how this movie is not much more than the entire 26 episodes compressed into a digestible 2 hour movie. And yet I found myself enjoying it enough even with having seen no more than just the first few episodes of the series.

Storywise, it did become confusing at times where you felt that if this had been the series, there would have been a better explanation. However, as it began to wrap up, I found that most of the questions niggling at the back of my mind ended up being answered in their own fashion. The main focus of this movie after all was the love story, which if taken only on that value, actually achieves its purpose.

On the other hand, if I were to pretend for a moment that I have seen the entire 26 episodes, and then watched this, then there's every chance that I will think this is nothing more than a long winded flashback/filler episode. But at least you wouldn't be confused. Thinking this way gives me a headache. At least I can safely say this is not an End of Evangelion style movie.

I've always adored the unique atmosphere that the fresh animation and character design that RahXephon offered. There's a certain muted quality with the colors that is refreshing. There's perhaps not as much eye candy as the series, owing to the fact that they omitted the bulk of the mecha and "techno-talk" from the main plot, but it's there nonetheless.

It's quite easy to dismiss the background music of this movie as being mediocre and there to just avoid awkward silences. It had a similar ethereal feel as it did in the series, but I guess it just didn't have the same effect due to it being compressed here. Yoko Kanno is great indeed in her musical contribution to the series but there wasn't nearly enough of her work in the movie that made too much of an impact.

The exception to that is the ending theme. I just have to add an extra paragraph to outline just how much I enjoyed "Tune the Rainbow," sung by Maaya Sakamoto, written by Yoko Kanno. I dare you to find a better combination. I never get tired of this particular song, and I always feel uplifted after it finishes. Truly special; if anything, just fast forward to the ending credits and listen to this magnificent piece and feel the rainbow being tuned.

The sum of the heart warming atmosphere, the tear inducing characterisation and the soul wrenching ending music definitely amounted to something more remarkable than you would expect. My final recomendation; whether or not you have seen the series, this movie is worth having in your collection (if only for the ending music ;) ).

[Tremolo]

Time is ticking away and I have yet to see a Scoot or Shino review. Psiknight, you should repost yours and Trem, you sounded like you were ready to go. 7 would be a better turn out than our measly 3!

And to all you other peeps considering the chocolate orange, remember, procrastinators never prosper.

I can't participate unfortunately because I write for Anime Secrets and are thus forbidden from doing so, but I'm following everything with considerable interest. Shame, I'd fancy a chocolate orange, too :XD:

[Scoot]

Anime Secrets forbids you writing any review apart from for them?

[7Raven7]

SCOOT!

Isn't this unfair? A cute innocent kitten paying others imprudence?

I am really feeling bad about blend a kitten.


Should I root for people not to turn in reviews??

I am torn by my interest to see people compete and my unsatisfiable hatred of cats...

[Tremolo]

Anime Secrets forbids you writing any review apart from for them?

Anime reviews on other anime websites, yeah. And I guess this sort of counts.

I HATH SOLD MY SOUL D:

[Scoot]

Awww - damn shame.

Should I submit one of my reviews to help keep up the numbers?

In the unlikely event of it winning, the chocolate orange would go to the runner up.

[chaste Angel]

Awww - damn shame.

Should I submit one of my reviews to help keep up the numbers?

In the unlikely event of it winning, the chocolate orange would go to the runner up.

Don't know. Maybe you should. In fact, I would like to read another one from you. But is the time left enough for you to make one?

If so, do what you think is the best.

Chiwassu!

[Scoot]

Well I wasn't thinking of writing a fresh one - but maybe submitting my Shakugan no Shana review - it talks about synergy? Anyway, I definately won't if the consensus is against.

[chaste Angel]

Well, just hope you'll be permitted or denied before the clock stops ticking.

What would you do in the last hour of submission if they didn't make any response?

Should I root for people not to turn in reviews??

I am torn by my interest to see people compete and my unsatisfiable hatred of cats...

Sorry, I haven't notice this when I first browsed.

If you hate cats, I would hate you too.

All domestic cats can be considered as my friend, therefore their foes are also my enemies.

I cant imagine my pet cats being blended nor my reaction if I something as horrible as that would happen.

[ShinoMatrix]

-_-

That's 5 reviews... more than the first time... and quite frankly, I've come to the realisation that this is enough because in terms of getting people to vote in, people aren't as eager to read that much stuff in one go in order to make up their mind... well, yeah, that's seeing things through my eyes, i.e. the lazy way.

[7Raven7]

I don't know, people have over 2 weeks to read this thread and some of the better earlier written reviews. And this site hasn't been exactly thriving with many new posts day to day so I think being able to go on every other day and seeing some progression in these contests give some fresh air to AA.

I would say I would perfer anywhere from 10-15 myself, I think that gives us more diversity in titles and personalities. They might take longer to read but I am sure they they take less time to make than those wallpapers/sigs which I am sure take a majority of a month.

In short, quit slacking off. ;)

[Two-twenty]

* squeezes in at the last second

Make that 6!

Here's something you won't find in the library:

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Eyebrows courtesy of FLCL

Title: The Dagger of Kamui; The Blade of Kamui; Revenge of the Ninja Warrior; Kamui no Ken
Genre: Action
Company: Madhouse
Format: 1 movie
Date: 1985

Summary:
When Jiro was thirteen he came home to find his mother and sister killed, with the murder weapon, a mysterious dagger, still left behind. Blamed for the crime, he found refuge under the tutelage of Tenkai, a Buddhist monk, in exchange for killing a rouge ninja. Years pass and Jiro has been trained as an assassin. Through a series of events he learns that the ninja he killed was his birth-father who defied Tenkai in order to stop him from finding Captain Kidd’s treasure, a treasure worth enough to empower the shogunate and avoid the Meiji restoration. Using the clues left behind in the mysterious dagger and with Tenkai and his minions hot on his trail, he devotes himself to travelling the world in search of Kidd’s treasure and a means in which to take revenge on his master.
– Summary by Two-twenty.

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Highs: Jiro and Oyuki grow on you; some wicked fight scenes.
Lows: Cut and paste storyline; too long; animation quality tends to dip; music has not aged well.

Grade: 70%

If you think that summary sounds a little convoluted, then not only are you right but it’s a good reflection of this anime in general. The Dagger of Kamui took so many twists and turns that it turned giving a brief and informative outline of the plot into a real task-and-a-half.

This probably has a lot to do with it being based off a series of novels by Tetsu Yano. Each plot point seemed only vaguely linked to the next one which made it seem much too episodic. The structure of the discourse was a little jarring as well. Right from the get-go the movie dived into an action sequence featuring Jiro in mid-battle with another ninja, who (for some reason not yet known by the viewer) had some sort of emotional attachment to him. After about two minutes I had to press stop and check to see if I rewound the tape properly. From there on, it’s a two-hour opus of coincidences and logical inconsistencies. Let’s go to Russia! Why not? While we’re at it, let’s head to the United States and pay Mark Twain a visit for no real apparent reason! In the world of The Dagger of Kamui, this is not only possible but logical. There were also several subplots that developed within each stage of the film, but they were never given anytime time to be properly fleshed out, nor should they, as they did nothing to propel the story toward its conclusion. It seemed like director Rintaro worked from a manuscript of a draft for this film without any editing or proofreading.

Aurally and visually it wasn't fantastic either. The OST sounded like training-montage music from a cheesy action film, so there were no surprises on this reviewer’s behalf when one actually showed up. The animation was pedestrian at times, dipping into the use of flashing backgrounds and lines of light for sword slashes.

Despite all of these faults, The Dagger of Kamui still gets a passing grade in my books. Oddly enough, this is because I found that after watching Jiro for 2+ hours, the guy eventually grew on me; I couldn’t help it. Even though the progression of the story was fractured, I found myself really looking forward to the ending, not because I didn't like it, but because I was really gunning to see how Jiro’s extraordinary adventure was going to conclude. Although I started off bored out of my mind, by the time the finale came around I was at least within the proximity of the edge of my seat. Worth a mention as well is Okyuki, one of the secondary characters. She was one of the few that were actually given the luxury of sincere depth and development, and for that, it made Jiro’s journey that much more dynamic. Also to its credit, the fight scenes were very cool. Some of the powers of the characters were truly wicked, like something right out of a bad acid trip.

If you are a patient person, I would recommend watching this anime. I do guarantee that you'll roll your eyes at it or move your finger precariously close to the stop button, but if you slog through it, it will not be a waste of your time.

[Sorrow-kun]

Title: Gokujou Seitokai aka The Best Student Council
Genre: Comedy
Company: J.C.Staff/Konami
Format: 26 episodes
Dates: 07/04/2005 to 29/05/2005

Synopsis: After Randou Rino’s mother dies, she is left with no-one, except a brash handpuppet she calls Pucchan and a penpal she’s never met who signs his letters with “Mr. Poppit”. Mr. Poppit instructs Rino to attend the renowned Miyagami High School, a school with a student council that yields so much money and power, it has become known as the Gokujou Student Council. There she becomes close friends with the student council’s charismatic president, Jinguji Kanade.

The Highlights
Characters: Massive cast of characters that is, for the most part, well managed
Comedy: Numerous misses, particularly earlier, but becomes easier to appreciate with time
Story: Completely ludicrous
Aesthetics: Low at best

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What marks the difference between a good gag comedy and a stale one? Wit, some may argue, or even comic timing. Gokujou Seitokai makes a different claim altogether, and puts the onus on the personalities of its large ensemble cast to deliver the laughs. It’s a risk in a sense, since such anime take time before its characters can make a true connection with the audience, but it’s one that eventually works for this series. Gokujou Seitokai is hardly a revolutionary or even memorable anime, but thanks to the way its elements come together, it ends up being an entertaining way to pass the time.

Gokujou’s strength comes from the way it manages its monster sized cast. Each character is given time in the spotlight, and the majority of the cast relish in the attention. This allows the audience to become familiar with the nuances of each character, who show, as the series progresses, that they are each deeper than a one-gag-act. For the most part, the episodic focus on each member of the council makes it easier for the audience to jump from merely liking the personalities to truly enjoying their humourous antics. What aids Gokujou further is the chemistry between various characters, which is no doubt enhanced by the way they are each developed. This anime is further ammunition for those who maintain that any story can be intriguing with strong character development… even one as ridiculous as Gokujou’s.

Though, saying Gokujou’s story is ridiculous is probably an understatement. It’s obvious that believability was never a priority, but, for this reason there are many elements in the story that are very difficult to swallow, from the student council’s infinite funds, to ninjas and psychic powers. In any other series, this fanciful story would have been a joke, and a bad one at that, but Gokujou makes it interesting to follow purely on the strength of its characters. Bad jokes, though, isn’t something that this outing lacks. Gokujou just doesn’t have the elements that mark a truly brilliant comedy, such as the comic timing of AzuDai or Ichigo Mashimaro or the scathing wit of Genshiken or Suzumiya Haruhi, meaning that a large number of its attempted jokes are more eyebrow-raising than chuckle-inducing. This is particularly true in the first half, but as the idiosyncrasies become more familiar the characters become easier to laugh at.

Gokujou Seikokai is hardly a special anime, and its production values are bargain basement at best. However, the synergy of its immensely sized ensemble cast makes this an entertaining and frequently amusing experience. The way this series handles its titanic cast is the most impressive thing about it, and it’s something that very few other anime can claim to have done as well.

The Rating: 6
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Reviewed by: Sorrow-kun

[Scoot]

According to my calculations there are still 24 hours until the official deadline - so if you have an idea you still have tonnes of time to make it reality - the competition is really hotting up this time round, and it doesn't look as though posting one of mine will be neccasary any longer.

[Two-twenty]

I'd like to bring up another issue before this round of voting starts. I'm pretty certain that a few AAers voted for themselves in the last contest, which I think isn't really fair. Perhaps with this coming voting session the poll could display who voted for who, just to make sure that it doesn't happen again. I'd like to see it in the official rules as well. Thoughts?

[Scoot]

Whilst technically voting for yourself is not a hanging crime, it is slightly low.

I would propose this: You can vote for whoever you like, yourself included.

However. If you vote for yourself I'll ask one of the mods to let me know - and I'll post the fact that you did at the end of the voting process for public shaming.

[L-sama]

Whilst technically voting for yourself is not a hanging crime, it is slightly low.

I would propose this: You can vote for whoever you like, yourself included.

However. If you vote for yourself I'll ask one of the mods to let me know - and I'll post the fact that you did at the end of the voting process for public shaming.

I totally agree, Scoot. Great idea. The public shaming idea adds a nice ring to the proposal too ^_^

[chaste Angel]

Nice, nice, nice, this contest has turned better than i thought.

I think seven reviews would not be that hard to read.

GOOD LUCK TO EACH AND EVERY PARTICIPANTS.

Chiwassu!

[Two-twenty]

Whilst technically voting for yourself is not a hanging crime, it is slightly low.

I would propose this: You can vote for whoever you like, yourself included.

However. If you vote for yourself I'll ask one of the mods to let me know - and I'll post the fact that you did at the end of the voting process for public shaming.
I'm fine with the honour system but honestly, I really don't care if someone votes for themselves. I just thought I'd bring it up in case somewhere in the future someone gets a feather if their arse and claims that: 'so-and-so shouldn't have won becasue they got one extra vote-THEIR OWN!!1! WRAAAAGH!'.

Anyways, it seems our little contest is growing! Good luck everyone!

[ShinoMatrix]

Just as the sig of the week contest is dying... :p

I guess the site couldn't sustain this many competition at one time :XD:

[Scoot]

THIS CONTEST IS NOW OVER!
Please no more posts in this thread - there will be another along very shortly


Yay for Two Twenty and Sorrow-kun for shoe-horning their reviews in as the doors of deadline-ville slam shut with a slightly creaky bang.

This contest is now over *imagine fireworks*!

There are 7 entrants this time round, and considering there are 6,951 members (at the time of writing) - that means I only need to blend 6,944 cute kittens!

A huge thank you to those who entered, and roll on the voting thread...