me and my friend made this on aim and its a story about Love Hina

[Sae]

Fn2Bteen: M: where's Shi-chan?
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:o....i dunno
Fn2Bteen: Naru: O.O no
Fn2Bteen: M: not that again! Shi-chan! wait!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*just watching*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: >< Kei-tar-o! you better get your lazy ass in gear and help us search for Shinobu!!!!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:ok
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:hmm..
Fn2Bteen: Naru: don't tell me..................she went there...............O.O all alone............
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:where did she go?
Fn2Bteen: Naru: P-P-Pararakelse i-island
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:O.O
Fn2Bteen: Naru: Oh No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fn2Bteen: Motoko: hey...........have you seen any sign of Su or Sara?
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:nope
Fn2Bteen: Kitsune: Oh no! don't tell me.....................they went on their own!?
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:maybe they went somwhere
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:k
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:the ill just go to the pool
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*jumps in the pool*
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:hmm....
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:do u want to go swimming?
Fn2Bteen: sure
Fn2Bteen: Naru: i need to go put on my swimsuit though
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:ok
Fn2Bteen: Naru: brb
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:ill wait
Fn2Bteen: Naru:hehehe
Fn2Bteen: Naru: heheheh
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:heh..
Fn2Bteen: Naru: woohoo! *cannonball*
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:AHH!!
Fn2Bteen: Naru: lol!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:woah
Fn2Bteen: Naru: heheheh
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*splash*
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:hehe
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*splashing u*
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*in his thoughts*::i think shinobe is with that guy::
Fn2Bteen: *splash*
Fn2Bteen: hey! no fair! u got a head start Keii-san
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:Hehe
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*splashes u alot*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: AHH! *splashes u a lot MORE*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: heheheh
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*splashes u back*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: ack! *gets out and does a cannonball on u*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: haHA
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:uh-oh
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:very wet
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*short pause*
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:wait a second Motoko's in that bush
Fn2Bteen: Naru: uh!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:O_O
Fn2Bteen: Naru: X.X
Fn2Bteen: Naru: it's all over now.............
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:O.o
Fn2Bteen: Naru: M-Motoko.....? W-we can explain...........! i think.......right Keitaro!?!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:yah...what she says
Fn2Bteen: Motoko: WHAT......IN............THE..........HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:
Fn2Bteen: Naru: uh.......oh.......^^; heheh
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:*in his thoughts*::i hope she doesnt take out her sword::
Fn2Bteen: Motoko: *takes out REAL sword (not her ussual practice sword)*
Fn2Bteen: Naru: we're doomed.............x.x
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:crud too late
Fn2Bteen: Shinobu: Motoko, WAIT!
Fn2Bteen: Naru: huh!?!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:what!?!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:how she get here?
Fn2Bteen: Shinobu: P-please, big sister! you can't kill them!
Fn2Bteen: Motoko:.................how did you get here, squirt?
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:eh....he
Fn2Bteen: Shinobu: that's besides the point!
Fn2Bteen: Shinobu: Please don't hurt them!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:hmm...
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:i hope this works
Fn2Bteen: Naru: ditto
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:eh...
Fn2Bteen: Kitsune: So y'all? what's it gonna be?
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:i hope i hope
Fn2Bteen: Su: i'm BAak!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:heh where did u go
Fn2Bteen: i went with Shi-chan and Sarah to P Island!
aNiMeLuBeR364: Heitoro:o

[Dennis]

It is interesting. Remove AIM names so neither you nor your friend gets harrassed by immature forum members.

[Smitty]

That was...incoherent :rolleyes:. Paragraphs anyone? :)

[UZ_white]

Can't... Read... all of it. Too much.

[LadySage]

Who the bloody hell is Heitoro?

[Kiba]

If it's a story it should have paragraphs and the proper spelling and grammar, and remove those screen names, other than that it was long and boring, I don't care for Love Hina much.

[LadySage]

The plot, from what I could gather:
"OHNOEZ, Shinobu is missing!"
"Uh-oh! Let's go swimming!"
"Okay. Oh, hi Shinobu!"

[Tyrdium]

It had a plot? I kinda gave up reading it after I realized that it was just incoherent babbling.

[Shadowmage]

It had a plot? I kinda gave up reading it after I realized that it was just incoherent babbling.
Shadowmage watches Sae never post here again.

[Sae]

god why do people want paragraphes if it was on aim?

Sae

[animanic_critic]

god why do people want paragraphes if it was on aim?

Sae
'Cause it'll be easier on the eyes, the story did blitzed my eyes reading it...:migrane: